Tommye Afalava
Tuesday, July 19, 2011
Which of these paragraphs sound the best?
The first is better . it's more emotional than the second.The third is a bit formal and sounds unreal and the repeat of sth and someone is not good. And you are xplaining one moment but you say each time she ... , it doesn't make a good scene.
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